redemption does not
enter into happiness
here and now only
repeating Mistakes
only should have been forgot
future consistent
sown into fabric
into justification
hoping dreams fulfill
truer words not yet
evoking new emotions
troubles worn out soul
intimidated
roaming about life to feel
will it play out right
~ J
This is my seventh attempt at a Haiku, the first five will be forever lost, the sixth is in a previous post.
I am sure my poetry falls into the "Sucking" category, however I was always fascinated by the haiku.
It is a type of poem that adheres to a very strict set of rules.
So much can be said in these small lines, yet too much must be left out.
To you this may seem like some random words, but to me there is a both deeper and hidden meaning.
~ J
Epilogue: I unfortunately ignore one important rule, a haiku typically consists of 16 versus :(
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